Beneath

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Inspired to write three or two pieces of rough poetry.
Like flecks in the inkwell, commonplace:
Please chop freely, do not hold back.
I wrote this casually, don't let me think my broom is the best.*

*Bi zhou zi zen = my broom is the best, i.e. most people think what they wrote is the best.

Greenlake

No. 2
Over the sky, cables stretched, the big bridge spans.
Under the bridge, a light boat, the water's face smooth.
Turn our heads to look up at the moon in the sky.
People crossing the bridge look like they're in the center of the moon.

Several people went to row boats together. Three other couples and us, after eating dinner, we rowed boats, people were singing and talking. There was beautiful moonlight shining on the water, it was so pretty, we decided to write poems.